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Re: if life could just have UNDO button....!!!
This review will be brutal, read if you dare. CAPITALIZATION! The first letter of every sentence, proper nouns, and the I's need to be capitalized. Just do it! The extra ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: The Ocean Breathes Salty
Well, although I have only a fuzzy idea of what love actually is, I think you captured it perfectly. It had a good rythem and I like how in the ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Go to Hell (Part 1 of 2)
Oh. My. Satan. This was amazing! I had to remind myself a dozen times I couldn't laugh out loud sitting at a library computer! I couldn't spot any mistakes and ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Suffocating
I noticed (like nyx) there were a few places where I think your space bar was being mean. A spell/grammar check could help with that. Also: Pleaded to go back, ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: To be God.
It sounds very interesting and I can't wait to see how it plays out! It left me with so many questions! It is like the work of a Devil, running ...
Jun 9, 2011