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Re: noah's great awakening
I must begin by saying that I did like your piece of writing. If I am correct, then this writing is about someone who is faced with a darkness that ...
May 13, 2017 -
Re: a
I must begin with this; the starting line was great for someone who just started this website. The way you were able to explain both the world and the character, ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Threads
First, can I say, that was great! The character in this poem had a few battles in his or her past, which makes this a perfect story. The words are ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: a collection of summer thoughts {farm house writings in italics}
This great for someone who understands what you are trying to get to them. I think that you have great skills, and that they are expressed in this. It shows ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Take Away
You spent a great deal of time on this, and I want you to know that your hard work has paied off. This is perfect, just the kind of poetry ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Ageless Faces Ancient Traces
I think this is great! You spent time in something that meant a lot to you, so as a reader, I spent time trying to understand the hinden meaning behind ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: peculiar galaxies on the insides of my hollow bones.
I feel that I could understand what you were saying in this writing. You have skills that can take you far in life. This may have been one of he ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
That was great. I can't believe this isn't in the world, this is that great. No lie. You can have what ever you want in life if your poetry is ...
Aug 27, 2016
