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ShadeMaster

  • Poetry » General, General Re: noah's great awakening

    I must begin by saying that I did like your piece of writing. If I am correct, then this writing is about someone who is faced with a darkness that ...

    May 13, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a

    I must begin with this; the starting line was great for someone who just started this website. The way you were able to explain both the world and the character, ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Threads

    First, can I say, that was great! The character in this poem had a few battles in his or her past, which makes this a perfect story. The words are ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: a collection of summer thoughts {farm house writings in italics}

    This great for someone who understands what you are trying to get to them. I think that you have great skills, and that they are expressed in this. It shows ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Take Away

    You spent a great deal of time on this, and I want you to know that your hard work has paied off. This is perfect, just the kind of poetry ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Ageless Faces Ancient Traces

    I think this is great! You spent time in something that meant a lot to you, so as a reader, I spent time trying to understand the hinden meaning behind ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: peculiar galaxies on the insides of my hollow bones.

    I feel that I could understand what you were saying in this writing. You have skills that can take you far in life. This may have been one of he ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Broken Boy

    That was great. I can't believe this isn't in the world, this is that great. No lie. You can have what ever you want in life if your poetry is ...

    Aug 27, 2016


Life is like an onion. You peel it off one layer at a time, and sometimes you weep.
— Carl Sandburg