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Re: The Bullet Grazed Her Heart pt.2
Ooh, I'm so glad you kept going with this, I loved the first part! right, I think you're better at writing description than writing about the people themselves, what they ...
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Re: Of fire and dreams (edited verson)
wow, I really like this poem, this imagery and description is amazing though I'm not sure what it was about I don't think it was supposed to be about anything ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night At Murder Mansion, part 2
Ooh, I just can't wait to see what happens!! This is great work! Being not so great at grammar 'English is only my second language,' I can't find any grammatical ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 1
I really like this! What's freaky is that I have a friends called Megan Bell who also has weird dreams, only she knows when she's dreaming and when she's awake. ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: A phoenix reborn.
Hiya I honestly cannot understand why so many people are telling you this poem needs allot more work ect. I really feel this woman's pain and sadness, you portrayed her ...
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Re: Fully alive. (An acrostic based on the song 'Fully Alive')
I really like this, good poem Falling into a dark abyss, Ugly thoughts run through your mind. ugly? I know it fits in well with the acrostic but I'm not ...
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Re: Dawn Reports 5
This is great work! Really enjoyed reading it! There was only one thing I didn't quite understand- In most cases changes is frightening the feeling of uncertainly leaves so many ...
Apr 18, 2010
