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Re: The Pact, Chapter One, Part One
I'm currently reading Joe Abercrombie and this reminds me of the work, and is just as good. It feels like the sort of work that could end up spanning a ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: The Animal Chapter 1
Nicely written story, a good set-up, and potential to be pretty spooky. Kinda makes me think of the Blair Witch or something. One thing I will say is a general ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: A house burns down from the POV of the fire.
I like this, it's a really unique concept. I laughed when I read the description but you pulled it off really well. I think perhaps the end could be added ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: My Reflection's Goodbye
Excellent work, very evocative and nice imagery. I don't agree with others in that it all needs to break up - but then I like run on sentences and think ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Nightmare
Very well written piece. Unlike others, I like the confusion of it all. Of course, knowing it is a dream helps, but I think confusion can work too in a ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: The Pact - Prologue Rewrite
ARGH as I can't delete comments, I will try again to leave a review instead of a comment (my last one was too short, despite editing). How embarassing. Here I ...
Jan 11, 2014
