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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Vibrant Butterfly

    This poem is refreshing: following the movement of this beautiful butterfly. The words transfer a message of joy and happiness; not caring about the limits the world tries to put ...

    Jul 12, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Crooked

    Your poem describes the emotions of someone with Scoliosis, feeling "crooked". And your poem describes the characteristics of someone with scoliosis which is educative. It helps someone who does not ...

    Jul 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hollow

    This is a beautiful poem. I can relate with this. The structure of this poem appeals to me, with the nice rhythm it has as well. It demonstrates this sort ...

    Jul 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Culture, Satire Re: Autism Is Not A Deformity

    This is a beautiful poem. It expresses the pain autistic people go through each day, to prove to the world they are not plagued with a disease. I have people ...

    Jul 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: What Words Can Never Say

    Katnes I like the big picture behind this poem. People masking their true pain and emotions with "noble speeches of valor" like you said. I also like the choice of ...

    Jun 25, 2019


But there was no goat man, there was NEVER any goat man!
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