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Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
Yup, you can reread it now if you'd like lol XD
Wed Aug 12, 2015 1:27 pm -
Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
lol when he says the thing about his clothes, he's saying it in a joking way. Idk, the way I hear it in my head, it makes sense, but I ...
Wed Aug 12, 2015 4:00 am -
Re: DUET :Chapter 4:
My main reason for replying weirdly enough is because you said huh to my use of duldrum XDDD I learned the word in like sixth grade so I guess I ...
Wed Aug 12, 2015 1:10 am -
Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
That moment when you just now see a review and you're happy because you're in the middle of rewriting thing that was reviewed lol Wow you had a field day ...
Wed Aug 12, 2015 12:13 am -
Re: DUET :Chapter 3:
Lol thanks I highly suggest you read the first book LAPIS, before you continue. That way you won't be confused later and you'll get to see the start of the ...
Thu Aug 06, 2015 12:48 am -
Re: DUET :The Prologue:
Yes lol DUET is a sequel The first book is named LAPIS, and you can find it on YWS in my portfolio lol Yes, Maggie is female, but she's actually ...
Sun Jul 26, 2015 4:27 pm -
Re: The Hoary Horse
Also don't call people "Dear", you make people sound like they're beneath you.
Tue Jul 14, 2015 2:44 pm -
Re: DUET :The Prologue:
OK! Though fair warning: the beginning of it is like 3 years old so it's kinda bad at first, so I'd just focus on content for a bit XDD
Tue Jul 14, 2015 4:21 am -
Re: DUET :The Prologue:
Oops I forgot to put a warning DUET is the second book in a series XDD The first, which is also on here, is called LAPIS I'd DEFINITELY read that ...
Tue Jul 14, 2015 4:15 am -
Re: She is Death Pt. 2 - The Cabin
ljsrhgkjzdbvkldac what is this line then?! "They all said I needed help because my parents death led me to kill Mr. Kapeson." Ok...((starting to remember why I don't review stories)) ...
Tue Jul 14, 2015 2:26 am -
Re: She is Death Pt. 1 - The Therapist
...*Doesn't really know what to say since I already reviewed the second chapter before reading this, and still feels exactly the same* Ok, so you made a filler chapter as ...
Tue Jul 14, 2015 2:08 am -
Re: The Religion of Education
You're very welcome dear XDD
Mon Jul 13, 2015 6:24 pm -
Re: E-Mom (The Original Short Story)
lol no, we never learn the MCs name or her father's. This is because the MC is a character that I want people to be able to put themselves into, ...
Tue Jul 07, 2015 7:15 am -
Re: DUET :Chapter 1:
Lol you're fine. Oh, and because you commented on the action, or at least, this scene. Remember that this is also the first chapter of this book, so you can't ...
Mon Jul 06, 2015 11:58 am -
Re: DUET :Chapter 1:
Lol the reasoning for the title of LAPIS is actually given in the final chapter of LAPIS, when the commander introduces herz in fact, it's the very last line. XD ...
Mon Jul 06, 2015 1:18 am