SereneSimpliciT

Yeahhhhhhhhhh (I honestly haven't been able to get on since school started last August, I'm so awful |D) So hi! I'm not dead! And I 1000% agree that this pales ...

Wow, I'm really late responding to this! So sorry! College is being . . . well, college. So I honestly agree with a lot of what you said. As mentioned ...

lol I'm glad you actually went in depth on this. To be totally honest, I actually don't read SF/F; LAPIS was just an idea that only seemed to make sense ...

They're song lyrics. Set it Off is the band. It coinsides with what happens to the main couple, and their fate. And the dialogue doesn't really start till the middle ...

Well, I will point out that by putting in the terms "She" and "He", you have incidentally put in a narrative. You've also hinted at events in this couple's relationship, ...

O.O MORGAN *hugs you* MY DEAR I WANTED TO HANG OUT WITH YOU ALL SUMMER BUT FORGOT TO CALL I'M SORRY TTnTT Anyway! I'm glad to hear from you! Hope ...

I think you're having the issues you are because you don't know what this is based off of lol This is based off an Emily Dickinson poem, number 480, which ...

Alright, I'll clear things up. While I would love you to read the rest of DUET, and it's predecessor (yes this is the second book in a series), LAPIS, I ...

Hi Hi just one comment really Nathan gets into the prestigious school because he is highly intelligent, on top of being the son of a high government official, not to ...

I enjoy your insights - mainly because you've known me for as long as you have so you write in a way that I can immediately know what we're talking ...

Helloooo~ Yeah, Isugoro doesn't pay attention to people as much as he does those he considers close. As for his feelings about being a soldier, he does go back and ...

Just realized I never replied to this comment XD My bad I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. DUET is actually the second book in the book series I'm currently ...

Hello there, Yes, there will eventually be a second chapter. The main reason I haven't written one is because this novel is actually a side project XD I'm also writing ...

lol so I actually took many precautions to make sure Maggie wouldn't be OP, by giving her major weaknesses. For instance, she has a very severe reaction to natural water ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I'd suggest going back and reading from the beginning, which is actually another book that's still on here called LAPIS Enjoy and thanks again! ~Maddie