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Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.5 (Final) - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hello, I haven't yet gotten around to reading the beginning chapters, but I recently read the last two chapters, 2.4 and 2.3, so the plot is making sense to me ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.3 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hey, I haven't yet read previous chapters, but this is very well-written. Your descriptions are beautiful and the dialogue is extremely entertaining! I don't really have any criticism for this ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 6.1
Hey, I haven't read the previous chapters, but this looks like an interesting story. One thing that stood out to me were parts like this: "You mean, just us four?" ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 22.2
Hey, Although I would love to have some helpful criticism to offer, I don't. This is really hard for me to find flaws to correct, being so well-written, so I'm ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: The Fox is Stuck Chapter 1: We Meet the Fox
Hey. :) I think this novel has potential, but I agree with otis118 that a prologue may improve this piece. Kuro is about 324 years old, but the Kuro that ...
Apr 3, 2016