SeraphVesna

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. You gave detailed imagery and the word choices were well selected. I liked the fact that it gave war a domestic feel to it rather ...

First off, let me bow before your descriptive prowess. The piece is lovely, truly. The last lines just killed me. I don't know if you've read The Things They Carried ...

Like a few reviewers before me I feel like this is a good start. A start, but it's not complete. I'm not going to say you rushed it, but it ...

I feel this is a very good start to what I believe is going to be a great story. I commend you for leading your readers on and then leaving ...