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Sup, Dreamy. :D *cheer* Nerezza didn’t eat, so neither would she. We're given no indication of this beforehand. ;) She drank from a water bottle stashed in the back of ...

First off, :smt081 really cool! I like how you have a force controlling both Sara and Nerezza. Just have to be a little careful about it. :D Sara’s head spun ...

:thud: Not a big fan of needles. :smt005 Hm. We need more thought bubbles here; how is Sara going to fix the problem? How does she propose to make it ...

The part I have trouble with is the flashback, and the Principle's actions towards her. With the latter, it seems like he's trying to play psychologist to her. I find ...

Sup, Dreamy. :D First off, :shock: and :smt035 . Your opening was very good, the only thing was these two sentences: Nerezza would be in the back of the building, ...

Np. :D Alright, I'll wait and see how it goes. :D :D :D

Sup again, Dreamy. :D First off, your opening paragraph is great. It really grabbed my attention. We get to see Sara be herself. :D Kudos! Getting into these schools require ...

I know it's kind of disheartening to have another crit when you've edited, so my sympathies are with you. :smt062 :D Resilience is not a trait I admire. Of course, ...

Hello, Dreamy. :D Class ended. “Hey,” Sara called out to Nerezza in the hallway. “Are you too stupid to remember that I’m supposed to give you a tour?” I feel ...

Hey there, Shaard. This is Seraph. And though this book was good, it was hard to read too much at any given time, it took a great deal of energy ...

Sup, Taytay. :D By the time school would be about over I had come up with a plan and texted it to James. Bleep! I grabbed my phone. Gt it! ...

Sup Tay. :) I must agree with Aqua and Gekko; the piece is too rushed. Try putting yourself in Pendora's shoes; she's about to go through a seriously life changing ...

Sup, Taytay. :) During our 1st semester assembly she told the whole school the we were going to cause her to quit her life time dream of being a teacher. ...

What up, Critical. :D Lost in my thoughts as I was, Let us into her thoughts, i.e., I wonder what Connor is up to. Oh, I hope I'm not too ...

Sup, Dakota. :D To Max, playing ball was a rudimentary and prehistoric indulgence for the less fortunate minded of dog-kind. This cracked me up. XD Though, 'less fortunate minded,' doesn't ...