Semoyia

Okay, first off I'm reviewing as I go through, so don't judge me too harshly till you get to the end please. Now, your first few sentences are choppy, instead ...

I actually like it, it's easy for ANYONE to relate to and you used words that aren't often used anymore, you wouldn't believe how many people have to ask what ...

I loved it, it shows that your not afraid to say what you feel and I admire that. I agree with Spealwithit, the beginning is too simplistic, adding something there ...

I liked it, it has a few things that could be fixed, for example all your I's need to be capitalized, for another in the beginning "A whisper in a ...

So far i like it, the whole student falling for a teacher thing is a normal bit but you changed it up a bit by adding the teachers P.O.V too. ...