Selin

Hey KnightlyAngel09, it's Selin here! First, I should mention that this poem is so far to be cheesy. The rhythm is perfect. Especially in this line; "And without you, I ...

Hello ozasatya! It's Selin. Before I begin to criticise your poem, I'd like to say welcome to YWS! I hope you will like this atmosphere of sharing lots of precious ...

Hey, June; it's Selin here! I still am not sure why did I choose this piece of your work to review, but I can say that when I see something ...

Hello KeepASecret! It's Selin here! First of all I'd like to say, welcome to YWS!!:) I hope you'll enjoy here. About your poem... When I saw the name, "Before I ...

Hey, Flower, it's Selin here! Your choice about theme is absolutely great. Time and how fast it passes. I liked your repetitions, "tick tock"s, as they ease to catch the ...

Hey, RJ, it's Selin here! I think you have a very exciting story in your poem. All those "I hear the whistling."s are to make that story more interesting somehow; ...

Hello, Love2act4ever, it's Selin here! I want to say that I found your poem a very good way of expressing the situation you're in. And it seems everbody agrees with ...

Hi, it's Selin here! First, I need to say that I really liked your poem. Especially the theme and the way you express it. Your descriptions were quite tasteful for ...

Hey, Clo! First of all, I should say that the last part connects the feeling very well. I mean it's like you're getting into a situation and express your thoughts ...