SeleneForeverDream

Thanks for the review, Cat. I'll have to work on that. This prologue really has nothing to do with the story, but I should catch the reader's attention a bit ...

Thanks for the review. I'm a grammar freak too, but I guess we still make mistakes. :)

I agreed, too! :D

Thank you Roo. :D Your reviews are always appreciated. :) I was originally going to post this as one of the later chapters, but I decided to do flashbacks instead. ...

Thanks for the review! :D I have chapter 2 out now. Faith is a... faithful person. Being unhappy in hard situations is not like her personality, but at times she ...

THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING! Well, I guess I caught that before but didn't do anything about it. *mumbles about being careless* I want this story in present day and this ...

Thank you all for reviewing! I wrote chapter 2 and it is now up to be reviewed. :)

Thank you! I was aiming to add some depth to Jake's character there. He's a rather squirrelly kind of person, but is still loving. I have to be careful with ...

Thank you for the review! I'll have to keep that in mind, because it's my first time writing something close to science-fiction. Suspense I'll keep in mind and food I'll ...

I love them, too! :)

Am I the only one who read this? Your right, it is like a Romeo and Juliet love story. I keep the book in my library, right next to Romeo ...

Yeah, I think I'll post Chapter 1 in a few days and start out from there. I was bored last night, so I just wrote this. This is my first ...

Oooooh! This is better than your last. I love your new stanzas! Oh, and I'm not emo and i love your poem! I love your last three stanzas. Those are ...

When are you writing the next one?

In desperate need of reviews... :cry: please? :D