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Hi! Thank you for the review and all the compliments! Yes, I have noticed that contradiction, and I was trying to find a way of fixing it, I'll edit it ...

Oh yes, I'll add some more information in later chapters on the reason why Armi have been captured so easily.

Oh my goodness, I always make the same mistakes O_o I'm sorry T.T Thank you for having the patience to find all my typos, it helped a lot. But I'm ...

I used "can't wait" too many times O_o oops.

Oh, Hi! I got here a little late this time, and I can't do much of a review seeing as everyone else did an excellent job already XD. I liked ...

You're welcome! Viva all caps! XD

Ah, yes, I understand now, I'll explain in later chapters, once he rebellion starts. The Armi did have weapons, but humans were more organized, and had more advanced technology, so ...

Hi there! Yes, I did make very silly mistakes :/ Anyway, yes while I was writing this I was thinking Richard would be a very evil character, but I decided ...

Hi! thank you very much for spending the time to read and review! I had no plans of continuing this, but you gave me a lot of good ideas, and ...

You are very welcome =D

And I just noticed I did some pretty stupid mistakes :/ I'll have to read it beater next time XD

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll fix what you pointed out.

Hi! Thank you very much for the kind words, I am glad that you liked this story so much! I fixed the paragraphs, I hope it looks beater now.

Thank you for reading, I'm really glad that you liked it!