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thank you! very helpful, i will definitely look through. I will be slowly revealing things throughout the story, don't worry :) -scribble

thank you! :)

wow, um thanks for your lovely review :) - Scribble

Thanks for the review, nice and constructive. 'Kingdom come' is a common phrase meaning "the next world" or "end of time". Its more commonly seen in the lords prayer, but ...

Thank you, I was thinking of editing this today, and your review will really help with that. I agree on the rushing part. I did feel that i needed to ...

I know! Whenever i read or watch horror, I can't believe they actually stay in the house, or 'investigate'. Thanks for the review, I'll look over that. -Scribble

Thank you, this review was very helpful! - Scribble

Thank you :) -Scribble

Thanks! I love anything scary, especially ghosts and ghouls. This was good review, and i'm glad you liked it :) - Scribble

Thanks, good review. I like your interpretation of the grave, really like it. -Scribble

wow, thanks. This is a great review. I feel much better about the poem now, ad I'm glad you liked it! - Scribble

Thank you, i'm glad you liked it. I didn't actually lose a friend, i had a horrible dream about losing my sister, who is also a good friend of mine. ...

Good advice, i shall take that on board. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review :) - Scribble

Ahh, you have good taste. I will give those a listen. I enjoy many genres of music all the way from Lady Gaga to Of Mice and Men and then ...