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Re: Luna Loving Friend
Hello and thanks for the detailed review! I was slightly misappropriating "does" and claiming (I think) the Middle English Archaic meaning purely because that's the way it came out of ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Luna Loving Friend
Firstly THANK YOU! I'm really grateful to you for your time looking at the first poem I have ever written down, this site is amazing. As for the constructive criticism, ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Binge watching tv, or, How to move on with your life, or, A letter to my ex boyfriend
Honest and forthright, personal but not overbearing. I really enjoyed it, the diction seems deliberately monotonous, which inculcates a feeling not unlike that which watching endless tv in a melanchol
Dec 29, 2014