Scartuina

Vivid imagery and consistent tone, the poem is almost beyond criticism. I wish I could write from deep inside like this, and when it try it turns out bad. In ...

I will fix the grammar stuff but I won't change "is" to "are" seeing as singular refers to the colour charcoal black, indicating a solid and unobstructed colour.

The inconsistencies are on purpose, but I think they might have gotten in the way of the narrative a bit too much so I agree there. The simile of leaving ...

this is because the cushion is more of a metaphor than a physical object.

I'm just happy people are getting different things out of it :D that's always the goal of any poem I write. That people can read it and apply their own ...

I'm glad my poem could make you think :D All meanings you can find are really correct. But I wrote this poem with the idea of responsibility, handing the torch ...