ScarlettBlacck

Thank you so much for the encouraging words. Not all men are villains true, but I wish I met less villains you know. I will be more creative on the ...

Thank you for the honesty i tried editing it and adding more rhythms. I hope it makes sense and is more enjoyable after the edit. Regarding the stanza part, I'm ...

I haven't been by the the bay in a long time and reading your poem draws me to the sea, good job. Please can you capitalise your I's i feel ...

Thank you so much, I will work on the punctuation and edit the piece, my biggest weakness has always been punctuation and grammar. I always wanted to be a writer ...

I am enjoying your poem so much that i am wishing for more detail, more feel? I hope you understand me, because the other comments have already addressed punctuation. I ...