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Re: Ups & Downs
I did read the whole thing, the vibe I got from it was cliche love poem, I think we have all written at least one. I do suggest line breaks, ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: The Wind Spell
Hi there, I was reading along, and I noticed that the structure of your stanzas likes to change a lot. It goes from AABB to AABB to ABCB to no ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: How It Used To Be
The first thing that I noticed was that every word is capitalized; now this is fine only I am wondering if the capitalization has a purpose. Right now I don’t ...
Jul 13, 2008
