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Re: REDACTED
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... None, great job! Poetry confuses me in so ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Absence of Matter
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... -Despite the flaws, this is a lot further ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: See you
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... - There is very poor sentence structure and ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: sigNATURE -- Chapter Two
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... "Most likely she shall see how She handles ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (10-1)
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... As far as I can see there aren't any. I'm ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Perfection
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... None! Good work! This was touching and beautiful, also sad... ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Kissing lesson with a sandwhich
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... None! Great job! This was hilarious! I loved it! Humorous ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Breeze
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - I don't like how short It is and frankly ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 5~ Untitled
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... Surprisingly I don't have any this time...Great Job! I'm quite ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 1- How do I Overcome this Past?
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... It doesn’t matter if itwas a vampire, werewolf, witch, or ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Jenny Fell And It Made For A Beautiful Betrayal
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - I know It's song lyrics, but I think punctuation ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Expectations
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - I don't like how it's in a big chunk, ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Dear Dale
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... Honestly. - I didn't like this mostly because It's not ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: All Is Fair In Love And War
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... JAMIL : (cutting in) But what? I don't understand! We ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Tragedy As Ascendance
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - Your sentence structure is fine but I'd suggest separating ...
Jul 27, 2014