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Re: The Life and Subsequent Ending of a Marshmallow
This is the motivation I needed before my history test. I love this story! The use of language to put so much personality into a mini marshmallow who yearns to ...
Apr 23, 2025 -
Re: Mischievous life
I love this! The way you set this up made it seem like reading a play script and the way you ended, still addressing it as if it was a ...
Apr 22, 2025 -
Re: the 'i wonder...' poem collection.
These are interesting poems. The way you wrote them, and the word choice makes me wonder what the meaning behind them is. The first poem "Like a Woman" seems like ...
Jan 27, 2025 -
Re: held by a memory, lost to a stranger
This is a beautiful poem. The way you described the photo of who I'm guessing is the mother, the use of language in the second stanza to create an almost ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: my mind is a mess, so i will fold my towels
This is an amazing poem. The unique use of the formatting and fonts gives us a look into the mind of the writer. With the neat writing at first that ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: Giving Up
I not a very poetic person, but this is a very good poem. It has a very deep meaning and the person taking is obvious glad to finally be out ...
Nov 11, 2024 -
Re: The Haunting of Gati's Estate
This is a great story. I really love the backstory for the main character. The use of language really helps, in my opinion, give this story an ominous and dreadful ...
Nov 11, 2024