Satira

wait wait WAIT pretzel do you seriously well okay then. O. KAYYYY...

:) glad I could help!

Do I rest my case?

Well, I admit I was rude but the thing is... you gave me the exact same review for one of my works. You follow a formula, which is not necessarily ...

thank you, steam!

yes, your criticism is totally correct. I'm going to delete that intro right...now.

thank you!

aww, thanks!! :D

Ah! thanks for clearing that up!

glad I could help! :D

I'm glad you liked it!

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Hello! Satira here for a review! I like your concept, with the shooting stars... It's interesting. My biggest criticism is that your dialogue has this rhythm, or formula to it, ...

Yep, don't worry, I'll update...sometime xD. I put it as a 'short story' because that's what it is- it's a part of a short story. But I COULD change the ...

Thank you for the review! All of your criticisms were spot on- maybe I'll take you up on your offer soon! : :) glad you liked it, for the most ...

I'm glad you like it and commented, anyway ! ^.^ this is for a contest, so I'll be churning out the next 2 or 3 parts very, very soon.