Satira

hey, don't worry. things will blow over. everything will be ok.

haha, you weren't rude, you were just voicing your opinion. The thing is, i'm not a fan of adjectives. i like flow, and i want to make things sound natural. ...

Ok. just going to say, i'd really rather you not do grammar-spelling-etc. kind of reviews. i want to be judged on the story, not just the mechanics of it. i ...

I absolutely loved this. don't ask me why. i just did. you know how rare it is to find a poet in here that DOESN"T RHYME?! you did it perfectly. ...

the one thing i would say is that the word 'icky' doesn't really fit with the voice of the tree. or 'deforesting', as that is so 'human' a term. but ...