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First, let me say that that's a really interesting take on what happened after the Prince came to take Snow White away. You worked with what the story already had ...

First, let me say that was very interesting. There's something to work with here, but it's buried a little too far under the surface to clearly see. Remember that I ...

This... is really good. There's a lot of stuff going on in this poem, and it took me a couple of read-throughs to fully understand all of it, but it ...

Hi tgirly, I saw the title for your story and thought it sounded interesting, so that's a plus right off the bat. And it does really describe the idea behind ...