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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Noevery - Prologue

    Thank you for your feedback. I did go ahead an edit with your points in mind as well. I hope I cleared up some of the confusion from my first ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Noevery - Prologue

    Thank you so much! You're gonna give me a big head talking like that xD Also, love the banner.

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: "Knife fight with Mark: Free"

    Ah, it doesn't. So sorry, Joseph, for the inaccurate information. I actually couldn't get an image to show up at all. When I tried to upload the image, nothing showed ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: "Knife fight with Mark: Free"

    Let me check on that. I'm not sure if things have changed - I have been gone for a looooong time xD.

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Noevery - Prologue

    *anime sparkle eyes* Okay :D I did a quick edit on some of the wording. Any further toying with will require full brain power... which I am out of...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Noevery - Prologue

    Ah yeah. It's hard to remember that the reader doesn't know what I know. Thank you for your feedback, Ruby! I understand this prologue is more confusing than it probably ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: (v.) to clear of impurity

    Thank you :D

    May 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: (v.) to clear of impurity

    Totally agreed. Formatting design and stanzas for this poem was tough. Mainly because it was spoken before it was written and spoken word doesn't always translate as gracefully into text. ...

    May 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Homecoming

    Yeah dude make sure you let me know whenever you post them.

    Apr 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Homecoming

    Four years ago? This is pretty impressive for 14 years old, honestly. Want to see what I was writing at 14? xD It's completely embarrassing.. Do you have any recent ...

    Apr 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    I don't poet-review but I really liked this one so I wanted to show some appreciation ^^ You should not-poet again sometime. I like your style.

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: (verb) to give up for the sake of a better cause

    Thank you. I think I do like all lowercase.

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: (verb) to give up for the sake of a better cause

    The word is "Sacrifice" which was gonna be the title of the poem but I thought "Nah, let's be fancy" lol.

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Pull Apart The Earth: 1

    Long time no see.

    Jul 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Deleted 56

    i said i don't know where i am which is always true for everyone. Favorite line in anything, ever. That is all.

    May 6, 2015


The words you speak become the house you live in.
— Hafiz