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Saruka

hey hey! <3

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: unwanted acquaintance

    I don't use the work 'dork a lot', I meant theirs because I was referring to their interests, and I keep talking because they won't listen, and I want/need them ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What a waste of wings!

    We submitted our reviews at the exact same time XD

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: New vs Old and Loyal

    Okay! Thanks for the clarification!

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: New vs Old and Loyal

    Hey Stormcloud! Aubrey had to do this for a school project. She was limited in how much she could write and the plot requirements didn't exactly give way for much ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Realistic Re: Empty Draft

    I WILL GIVE POINTS MORE MORE MORE

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Lyrics » General, Dramatic Re: Disappearing In Front Of Your Eyes

    I didn't really help with this poem, thanks for the review on my friend's poem! She's new to the site, so she made me co-author so I could fix anything ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stylistic Choice

    the lowercase i and the uppercase This in the same sentence

    Apr 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: depression isn't funny

    Hi there! I'm going through some depressing times right now, and poetry helps me to vent, so this is the outcome of my depression. I find it easy to just ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Downhill

    nah just making this up it's okay ;)

    Apr 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: If Only

    Does this have something to do with my poem?

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: If Only

    what do you mean by that

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Culture Re: Never Gonna Give You Up

    This is a beautiful song. You are truly a talent at lyric-writing. Best April fool's ever

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Goodbye (depressing)

    Aw, thanks ;)

    Mar 31, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Goodbye (depressing)

    It's alright, I'm not making any decisions ;)

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: If Only

    Hi Dachsie! Thanks for the feedback. I did group my poem into several stanzas but YWS wouldn't recognize them. I need to try and find a way to fix that. ...

    Mar 12, 2017


And then, as if written by the hand of a bad novelist, an incredible thing happened.
— Bartimaeus of Uruk