Sarrasponda

Hello! Your story idea looks really interesting; kind of like Avatar the last airbender with its different elemental powers. I also noticed your super representational names of characters and places- ...

Thanks for the review! :D Actually, made this story idea before reading the Hunger Games, although I have since then read that series. :P I will definitely use your suggestions/ ...

I like it :D Ignorance has got the reviewing down pat so I'll skip that part. :) keep writing!

thanks for the review! Yes I plan to do the detail later; by the way you pretty much guessed the entire background so kudos to you too :P

Thanks :)

Good idea thanks for the review.

Thanks for reminding me about my characters; they are the element of a story I have the most trouble with. :P Sorry you'll find I haven't described him; that comes ...

Thanks I am still figuring it out so expect mistakes :P

Wow that's amazing you completely captured the message! What a great job, it's really well done.

Well I am super sorry; I looked at your description and immediately wanted to read your story but the link doesn't show up as a link on my computer so ...

That's hilarious; thumbs up to you my friend for being able to remember your dreams long enough to write them down! xD ... and a round of applause for having ...

amazing :P

Hi this is my first review, so it will probably be less than good, but I hope it's a little bit helpful. Reading your story, the first thing I have ...