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SarcasticSlytherin

  • Poetry » General, General Re: when the sun lied.

    I reread this about three times, and interpreted it slightly differently every time. When I went back up for the third, I glanced at your profile information thingy. Are you ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wakers and Sleepers

    Wow. I've read a couple of things by you now, and each time I'm amazed. You're a very talented writer. The only thing I can find to complain about (as ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: beauty in the beast

    Right off the bat, I really like this piece. It has some really nice imagery and I love your choice of words. That being said, punctuation and capitalization would definitely ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter's Demand

    Hi! Okay, this was honestly a really good poem. I like it a lot, especially the fact it isn't based on overdone themes or uses a trite rhyme pattern to ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Timothy Sees Santa

    Awww. Honestly, this is adorable. I absolutely loved this piece. I don't know who Timothy is, but he sounds adorable. And manipulative. But mainly adorable. I really want more of ...

    Nov 5, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Moving On

    Wow. I really liked this! The story flows really nicely, and you can empathize fairly easily with the character (even as someone from an unbroken home). Despite how much I ...

    Nov 5, 2016


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia