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SarcasticSlytherin

  • Poetry » General, General Re: when the sun lied.

    I reread this about three times, and interpreted it slightly differently every time. When I went back up for the third, I glanced at your profile information thingy. Are you ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wakers and Sleepers

    Wow. I've read a couple of things by you now, and each time I'm amazed. You're a very talented writer. The only thing I can find to complain about (as ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: beauty in the beast

    Right off the bat, I really like this piece. It has some really nice imagery and I love your choice of words. That being said, punctuation and capitalization would definitely ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter's Demand

    Hi! Okay, this was honestly a really good poem. I like it a lot, especially the fact it isn't based on overdone themes or uses a trite rhyme pattern to ...

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Timothy Sees Santa

    Awww. Honestly, this is adorable. I absolutely loved this piece. I don't know who Timothy is, but he sounds adorable. And manipulative. But mainly adorable. I really want more of ...

    Nov 5, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Moving On

    Wow. I really liked this! The story flows really nicely, and you can empathize fairly easily with the character (even as someone from an unbroken home). Despite how much I ...

    Nov 5, 2016


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites