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Re: when the sun lied.
I reread this about three times, and interpreted it slightly differently every time. When I went back up for the third, I glanced at your profile information thingy. Are you ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Wakers and Sleepers
Wow. I've read a couple of things by you now, and each time I'm amazed. You're a very talented writer. The only thing I can find to complain about (as ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: beauty in the beast
Right off the bat, I really like this piece. It has some really nice imagery and I love your choice of words. That being said, punctuation and capitalization would definitely ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Winter's Demand
Hi! Okay, this was honestly a really good poem. I like it a lot, especially the fact it isn't based on overdone themes or uses a trite rhyme pattern to ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Timothy Sees Santa
Awww. Honestly, this is adorable. I absolutely loved this piece. I don't know who Timothy is, but he sounds adorable. And manipulative. But mainly adorable. I really want more of ...
Nov 5, 2016 -
Re: Moving On
Wow. I really liked this! The story flows really nicely, and you can empathize fairly easily with the character (even as someone from an unbroken home). Despite how much I ...
Nov 5, 2016
