SarahK

I get what you were trying to go with this, but you made too many mistakes. -grammar -rating -punctuation -structure -flow Ok, I know I’m being rude, so I’ll stop ...

I liked it. Ok, well, it could have been better. You’ve got the idea ,but here some things that need correction. It all needs to keep the same flow. Most ...

It was great and I loved it! I wasn’t so sure about the rhyming you did though. not every single line has to rhyme with the line before or after ...

Well, I get the idea, but YOU didn’t quite get it. You really need to read over everything. If one thing doesn’t fit, well, take it out. Every word, phrase, ...

I don’t know what to say, it was wonderful! I loved it! The best thing I’ve read all night! Wow I just need a moment to cry about how unbelievably ...

I love the idea, and the expression, WOW! Don’t misunderstand me, but around the end I felt like I was lost. It was kind of like going into a scary ...