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Hello Hiccup! I like your story a lot! It's very interesting. But I'd like to make a few suggestions. As I stepped inside, I was greeted by a young man, ...

Okay! Let's get to work. I liked it and thought it was good. :) I have a few pointers though. Something that jumped out at me: “The sun is up, ...

Ok! Here to review. First of all, I love the way you spelt the name Nicolae. :) I've never seen it this way (I'm a sucker for unusual names). And ...

I feel like I know your characters pretty well and I know a lot about your world also. You've done a great job with both of those, but still there ...

Sorry for being so late! I've been a bit busy. Better late than never though, right? The first thing that jumps out at me is when she is in the ...

That was pretty epic... There's not much that I can say to help improve this, because it is already great, but I'll tell what I liked about it and what ...

Ok, first things first, please fix the capitalization errors. Some of your sentences seem worded oddly so I would suggest reading it out loud to yourself. You'll probably catch a ...

This was pretty epic... My favorite part was when the little girl stood. :) That was beautiful. I agree that the dialogue didn't seem as realistic as it could be. ...

I love this! All your chapters are so descriptive and captivating. The way you describe how she is feeling and her surroundings is amazing. I agree with Ahmadblues that you ...

You have no idea how much this poem means to me... I love the concept and everything. It connects with me so well because I have an odd name, to ...

When I was little I used to think the sun followed me too! I loved all the metaphors... It sounded like you were talking about a guy but then the ...

This is very interesting so far... I could see what was happening. You're descriptions are wonderful. :) Mostly, you described the things that were important to Georgia, which is very ...

Wow... This is super descriptive. It painted a wonderful picture. :) Some of the sentences were a bit long and confused me. I'm pretty sure there were a few run ...

I think about the I am thing all the time... I'll be like, "Who am I? I am, but I am what?" It's an interesting topic. :) I like the ...

That answered a lot of questions... Thank you so much for doing that even if there were a few new questions. It all adds to the mystery! Keep me hanging. ...