SandDuster

Thanks for your review! I know I had a few minor errors I wrote this in a flash I am currently writing the next chapter and ill be sure to ...

...wow that was intense. From the moment I started reading I was intrigued. The girl seems troubled but she was powerful. I enjoyed her last sentence I am Ketta and ...

That was perfect! It was smooth and easy to understand and it just flowed right off the screen great job!

Thank you very much! I will be sure to edit it and make changes to make her falling for him more smooth :)

Thank you very much for the review! I didn't edit closely enough and I hues I was just excited to post my first work but I love the positive criticism. ...

This poem is rather depressing but I enjoyed reading it! Great job!