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Re: College Essay {help help please}
Well, I really like your piece... It's Extraordinary... The ending... I JUST LOVED IT!... I will never forget my time in the Dominican, and I definitely plan on giving more ...
Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:18 pm -
Re: Love turned to hate
Hmm... It's a good topic BUT The problem with it is that I really Love rhymes... And it actually is the main key to grab a reader's attention... The topic ...
Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:58 pm -
Re: Winter's love.
WHOOOOOOSSHHHHH!!!! What a MASTERPIECE!!!.... :O EPIC!... Just AWESOME!.... Such an Inspiring way of writing poetry.... Well it really DID inspire me ALOT!... INNOVATIVE it is... This Surely is a WOW!
Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:55 pm -
Re: Bad Days at School
Well, this piece of work is good keeping in consideration that you are a junior writer the way I am... Just focus on the rhyming part of the poem because ...
Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:51 pm -
Re: Rain Drops
I agree with amygabbs.. Coz emmm the line's rhythms.... You gotta work over them but overall it was good... Nice work.. Keep up the good work and u'll go further... ...
Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:38 pm