SanaIrfan

Well, I really like your piece... It's Extraordinary... The ending... I JUST LOVED IT!... I will never forget my time in the Dominican, and I definitely plan on giving more ...

Hmm... It's a good topic BUT The problem with it is that I really Love rhymes... And it actually is the main key to grab a reader's attention... The topic ...

WHOOOOOOSSHHHHH!!!! What a MASTERPIECE!!!.... :O EPIC!... Just AWESOME!.... Such an Inspiring way of writing poetry.... Well it really DID inspire me ALOT!... INNOVATIVE it is... This Surely is a WOW!

Well, this piece of work is good keeping in consideration that you are a junior writer the way I am... Just focus on the rhyming part of the poem because ...

I agree with amygabbs.. Coz emmm the line's rhythms.... You gotta work over them but overall it was good... Nice work.. Keep up the good work and u'll go further... ...