Samsal

well it was a nice poem. it was fun to read and writers block can be such a pain!!i dont really feel anything when i read this poem. it is ...

But it can all be stopped By sharing a smile, A hug, a kiss, A knowing look; Is all it takes. To completely change A life. these words have really ...

The last thing we thought of Was loving each other. Would it have changed If we all were treated like brothers? this is the only stanza that i liked because ...

The Mother of My Father The mother of my father IS my guardian angel . You once told me that we never truly leave the things we love.. You said ...

[quote] Leave the poor black child in his crumbling school. Allow snowflakes of poison to rest on his haven of slumber. Degrade him, and feed your young the elite. [quote] ...

ok this is a wonderful poem. i loved that it made me care what was going on and it doesnt lack in anything as far as i could is a ...

ok. i like the message that you wrote about in this poem and though i think that it is a good poem. i would have cared more if you had ...

Never breathe without protection that is my favorite line from your is the only one that stuck with me. i had to read it a few times and i still ...

well i get what you were trying to do with this poem and at some points i like what i read and you made me care about what you were ...

i really liked some of the questions you asked. it had you thinking and it made my think of my on life and how some of those questions related to ...

yeah i think the poem is cool and all but it does have a different feel to it when you read it without the second stanza. so i hope you ...