SamWeeks

This is very good. Some great imagery and feeling throughout, it's all excellent but I think my favourite stanza is the final one, it wraps up the poem; giving a ...

I really liked it, I think it sounds cheerful in a weird kind of a way, like you're 'telling the world to go to hell' (only in a way that ...

All that can be said about italicizing has already been said to I'll get right to it: I really like this as an introduction into your world. One of the ...

Well I'm going against the flow and saying that I didn't like it. Firstly I'm not sure about the voice of the poem, knowing you personally I don't think it ...

I'll get what I believe to be a typo out of the way first: the blue flames lapsed violently at me. I think you mean lapped, unless the flames were ...