Sam

OOOHH RANDOM EMOTIONAL RANT! YAY! I have to break it to you Liz, however, that as a piece of writing this wasn't all that great. You lost me by the ...

I thought you had a very good pace to this, up until the part where Julia and her father head up to her room...there it just got very rushed, and ...

This was absolutely beautiful at the beginning, but you began to slip near the end- you got to rambling. ' Julia opened her eyes sluggishly, curious as to why he ...

YAY!!!! Okay...I've got to actually critique something now... First of all, 'Phillie' is 'Philly'... 'I went with a grey long-sleeved shirt with a deep red one over the top, blue ...

"I was back at Advanced Barding the next day. The mark had disappeared completely. It was like being let back into the village or something. Suddenly I heard of rumors ...

I don't know... I hate that a good percentage of 'teen' books are written for girls. And I hate it that most of them have the same plot. there are ...

'Her mouth was chapped and downhearted with a perennial frown that no time would heal. She had gained weight since last we met. It should be no parents experience to ...

To me, this was marginal. A very flat girl who lives a stereotyped life of a ruler...mhmmm. And, a girl from the time you are describing here would have not ...

This is the exact same poem as I Love You Poem (1). Not good...these are two completely different characters, treat them as such. They are sure as heck not going ...

There are far too many repetitions of the word 'love' and variations of the word love...yick yuck. I'm getting Hallmark card, dunno about you. Find some synonyms for the word ...

This is directly on the tip of the divide between 'Pity Me I'm a Loser and Hate My Ex Bob Over There' and 'Brilliant Yet Strange'. Not good, may I ...

This was OK. Definitely not your best, Misty, but I kind of get where you got it from. (HAPPY BIRTHDAY!) 'when you see me sauntering through the mall hiding behind ...

This is pretty funny, actually. I love the main character... Although, the idea of crime scene investigation was fairly new at the would be slightly like calling in the witch ...

a-hah...a-hah...I gotcha. 'If I wanted to taste the back of your throat and mark it with wild graffiti--my wild graffiti-- I would, and that is why I did.' I am ...

Just for a moment, pretend that you are James. There's basically a tumultous rain of musket balls coming down on you every twenty seconds, and you don't react in the ...