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Re: Dirt in My Own Grave ch. 4
Hey, Saint! Yayyyy, more Eric! This chapter wasn't as terrible as you think. ^_~ Eric's character came out really well with this one, and it was fun to finally see ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Pink High Tops and Buterfly Wings
Hey, KailaMarie! This prompt looks familiar. ^_~ I'm loving reading all the different responses to the same thing--they're so different! This piece was cool because it was kind of sarcastic, ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Turquoise Chapter Three
Hey again, KBrowlingmeyerFAN! Haha, this story just keeps better and better. ^_~ I'm really glad you're sticking with it! I love Charlie, and this new conflict with Nathaniel is beyond ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Papier-mache and Purple
Hey, alleycat! I absolutely adored this piece. It's simple, but beautiful--just like the butterfly costume you were describing. The character is really well rounded, and you fit a lot of ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: The Watchers
Hey, Conrad! I've got to say, that was the most original plot I've seen in a long while. It was really crisply executed--it wrapped itself up, strings and all, in ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Du Og Meg
Clo! Okay, so, I'm delirious with happiness. This piece was packed with your usual beauty ("Her mother was composed of depression and nothing else; she walked with it, she used ...
Aug 2, 2008 -
Re: The Bright Park of the Sky #1
Calllll! Okay, so basically, I adore Ray. I feel bad for the poor guy, and I don't know all that much about him--all I know is that he had to ...
Aug 2, 2008 -
Re: Keeping Time
Tillychan! Okay, so. I can't ramble enough about this piece--it makes me choke up if I actually click the links to read the letters as the story goes along. The ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: daddy <3
Hey, seventeenmistyears! Welcome to YWS. Quick reminder before I get started--we have a 2:1 policy regarding reviews. Basically, for every piece you post in the lit forums, you should do ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: The lost soldier 3
Hey, Willow! I'm going to have to agree--this chapter was really cool. It's hard to build suspense so early on in the story, but the way that you staged the ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: I Kissed a Girl
Hey, Overeasy! [I still grovel at your feet for totally shirking on critiques you asked for earlier this summer--I had the world's most crazy last two weeks of school, and ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Jared! Doood, radical line edits. I read this last night, too, and you've improved it a lot just in a short space of time. You rule--and so does this piece. ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Magic Carpet Ride - Prologue{unfinished}
Hey, Save Ferris! Sorry it took me eight thousand years to get back to you. ^_^ I really like your narrator--I feel bad for her, but I can't help but ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: Kate Has 8 Lives :3rd Chapter
Hey, Curly! Oh, my goodness, I love Jack also. XD Kate is fabulous as ever, and your plot (have I mentioned this before?) is ah-mazing. You were able to spin ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Turqouise Chapter Two
Hey, KBrowlingmeyerFAN! Yay! Another Turquoise chapter. ^_^ I really love Charlie--she's got this weird relationship with her grandma that I can't figure out, but I love the sort of internal ...
Jul 16, 2008
