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Hey, Miya! I'm with Emily--the start to your story was quite good. It's kind of a nightmare--everyone hates that feeling.. :wink: A few things to talk about: WHY DON'T PEOPLE ...

Hey, winie! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ This was a really good story. Bella is such a pretty name. I really liked the way you used detail to build a proper ...

Hey, Cal! You probably already know that I love your characters more than life itself. They work so well together, and you can totally see--even from this little piece taken ...

Hey, Kylan! I can't claim to be a poet, but I do read a lot of poetry, so I suppose I can tell you what works and what doesn't. I ...

Hey, Eva! Poor guy. I really liked the way you handled this subject--his desperation is really easy to see, even though he has to resort to desperate measures. Your style ...

Hey, Leja! I'm much better with the ripping apart than with groveling at your feet, but let me just say that I love this story, and the world it's set ...

Hey, Lady Kyra! I've got to say--this is a really beautiful piece. You've definitely got a grasp of what words are and what to do with them. :wink: You're an ...

Hey, Gryphon_Fledgling! Okay. So. I'm kind of in love with this story. XD I completely wasn't expecting that--it's so quirky and off-kilter. I love the idea of the grandfather, and, ...

Hey, gyrfalcon! I can't say I've ever read any of your work before, and I was really impressed. This piece completely lived up to the story--it's an absolutely beautiful [and ...

Hurrah! You wrote! ^_^ I've got to say--it really is a treat to read your things, every time. Not going to lie. You have a unique perspective, and all of ...

Hey, lakegirls! You have a really good topic here. However, my response to your intro was, "Uhm, no". An intro is good. However, you don't want to have an open-ended ...

Hey, ForgottenAuthor! Oh, goodness, eighth grade Home Ec...who doesn't have horror stories stemming from it? ^_~ A cute boy is always a nice twist, though. I did enjoy the fact ...

Hey, Eimear! This is a really cool story. Your style is very conversational and flows quite well, so it's easy as well as fun to read--something that's rather hard to ...

Hey, Ten Sweet Bliss! Katharsis is right. ^_~ You have a really awesome style--it flows well, and you know how to put a sentence together. (Doesn't sound like it should ...

Hey, Volant! This was a really eye-opening piece--there aren't that many things written about gang members. I read a lot of stuff about high school crushes and dances and drama, ...