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Jaaaared! Okay, so, I must agree--this format, though it's hard to pull off, you did extremely well. I love it. It keeps things clipping along at a nice pace, and ...

Kyyylan! I'm going to have to give you Sam Critique : Lite because I am a tired person, and you already know how much I love you. This is so ...

Ashleyyyyy! Yay, culture clash for the win! I'm so excited to learn more about Thomas. I was also really happy to find out about Yamini's mother, because that's a really ...

Hey, dreamintechnicolor! Ah, cool piece! It was short and sweet, but you managed to pack sci-fi fairy-tale feel into it that I really enjoyed. The character's conflict was great, too--something ...

Hey, XxxDo! Eeek, rape story! Goodness gracious. They're great for characterization and conflict, but goodness, not uplifting reading. ^_~ What was uplifting is that you can write . Most people ...

Azila! You are back indeed. And better than ever! I really loved this piece--it was sweet in a way that's hard to write without being cloying and sentimental. The story ...

AAAGH, I just had a whole thing typed out and my internet died. Phooey, that is what I say to that. Anyway! Mm, I love India, too. ^_^ You did ...

Haha, all the worst books I've ever read I've had to read were for English class. - Interstellar Pig , by William Sleator - The Iliad - Death of a ...

Ah! You need to read Looking For Alaska by John Green--it's really sweet as a romance, but has a little more "depth" to it. Also, check out the Georgia Nicolson ...

Jennnnn writing! Okay, so I'm definitely digging the formatting, even if it takes a bit of effort to follow--it's really neat when you step out of your comfort zone, and ...

Saiiiint! Okay, so I definitely love the portrayal of the dancers as a single entity--it makes the whole thing a lot more creepy, and makes it easy for us to ...

Pattycakes! Ah-huh, who's finally caught up on Khalilzad? In retrospect, I should have completely ignored the flu and summer school (one and the same actually) and spent time reading this. ...

Callll! Oh, goodness, I love this--especially the end. In the last bit in the hotel room, it seemed that you got a lot more comfortable with the present tense, and ...

Conrad! Ooh, a very intriguing story indeed. Have you read Rant by Chuck Palahniuk? The gene candy kind of reminded me of that society--it's a good read, if you haven't. ...

Kyyyyylan! Oh, dear, it appears that the doorway to my heart is somewhere in Jerusalem. -_- Your language, as usual, is beautiful--and this whole story had a way of taking ...