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  • Other » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Star Knight's Cross Chapter 1: Answer

    Thanks a bunch for the review! I think it's one of the longest I've had and I'm very grateful for the time you've spent to comment on my work! Context ...

    Sep 6, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 28: Clash of Battering Rams

    Many thanks for the review!! About Nepalo checking on the Hera Trio, at first I had written that with the intention to show how little he cares for his allies ...

    Sep 6, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 18: Get Ready for Hell

    Thank you for the review! Your theory about Yuki's guilt is right on point. This is one of the chapters I wanted to use to provide character insight as there ...

    Aug 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 27: Vortex of Crimson

    Thanks a bunch for the review! I like your comment about Annabel, Yonira and Keiry D. I had always planned for Annabel and Yonira to have a rivalry mirroring the ...

    Aug 5, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 26: March of Glory and Revenge

    Thank you for the review! It was deliberate to put this and the last chapter back to back to contrast a solo battle versus one with multiple participants - something ...

    Aug 4, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 16: The Challenge

    Thanks for the review! Being the main characters in the story, Yuki, Hikaru and Seiren will indeed be the most fleshed ones as well as the ones who will have ...

    Aug 1, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Star Knight's Cross Chapter 2: Outcast

    Thank you for the review! I'll be sure to remove stuff like the one you commented on in future chapters. I just wanted to better separate character actions from the ...

    Jul 25, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 25: Infinite Blue

    Thank you for the review! Your guess that Tokura only thought he had altruistic motives at first is right on the spot! There is a bit of self-deception going on ...

    Jul 15, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 24: Things Turn

    Thank you so much for the review! The one who hit the tower was actually Ulura, being able to cut through it due to her increased deva output. The mention ...

    Jul 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 23: Advantage Thiefs

    Thank you so much for the review!! Nepalo is the member of the Martians who values strength above all else. If he sees strength in someone, he will respect them, ...

    Jun 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 22: Bolt All Over the Place

    I appreciate the review very much! This chapter was always meant to be overwhelming in order to show just hos stressful and chaotic a Class Battle can be, especially through ...

    Jun 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 21: Welcome to the Clash

    Thanks for the review! I actually hadn't realized there was such a deep meaning to Saya's words and actions in this chapter until you explained that in detail! I guess ...

    Jun 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 20: On the Eve of the Battle

    Thank you for the review! I think this is one of longest reviews of a chapter of mine so far, so I'm grateful that you spent so much time to ...

    Jun 27, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 19: Strategy

    Thank you very much for the review!! Descriptions of the environment are one of the main things I'm still working on and will be one of the last to be ...

    Jun 27, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 18: Get Ready for Hell

    Thank you for the review! All the humour is deliberate, trust me. The more you laugh, the better it is for me as that means the comedic moments I've put ...

    Jun 25, 2022


Proud people breed sad sorrows for themselves.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights