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Re: Star Knight's Cross Chapter 1: Answer
Thanks a bunch for the review! I think it's one of the longest I've had and I'm very grateful for the time you've spent to comment on my work! Context ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 28: Clash of Battering Rams
Many thanks for the review!! About Nepalo checking on the Hera Trio, at first I had written that with the intention to show how little he cares for his allies ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 18: Get Ready for Hell
Thank you for the review! Your theory about Yuki's guilt is right on point. This is one of the chapters I wanted to use to provide character insight as there ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 27: Vortex of Crimson
Thanks a bunch for the review! I like your comment about Annabel, Yonira and Keiry D. I had always planned for Annabel and Yonira to have a rivalry mirroring the ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 26: March of Glory and Revenge
Thank you for the review! It was deliberate to put this and the last chapter back to back to contrast a solo battle versus one with multiple participants - something ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 16: The Challenge
Thanks for the review! Being the main characters in the story, Yuki, Hikaru and Seiren will indeed be the most fleshed ones as well as the ones who will have ...
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Re: Star Knight's Cross Chapter 2: Outcast
Thank you for the review! I'll be sure to remove stuff like the one you commented on in future chapters. I just wanted to better separate character actions from the ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 25: Infinite Blue
Thank you for the review! Your guess that Tokura only thought he had altruistic motives at first is right on the spot! There is a bit of self-deception going on ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 24: Things Turn
Thank you so much for the review! The one who hit the tower was actually Ulura, being able to cut through it due to her increased deva output. The mention ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 23: Advantage Thiefs
Thank you so much for the review!! Nepalo is the member of the Martians who values strength above all else. If he sees strength in someone, he will respect them, ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 22: Bolt All Over the Place
I appreciate the review very much! This chapter was always meant to be overwhelming in order to show just hos stressful and chaotic a Class Battle can be, especially through ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 21: Welcome to the Clash
Thanks for the review! I actually hadn't realized there was such a deep meaning to Saya's words and actions in this chapter until you explained that in detail! I guess ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 20: On the Eve of the Battle
Thank you for the review! I think this is one of longest reviews of a chapter of mine so far, so I'm grateful that you spent so much time to ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 19: Strategy
Thank you very much for the review!! Descriptions of the environment are one of the main things I'm still working on and will be one of the last to be ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 18: Get Ready for Hell
Thank you for the review! All the humour is deliberate, trust me. The more you laugh, the better it is for me as that means the comedic moments I've put ...
Jun 25, 2022
