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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 34
Hey! Salis here with a review! This was a very relaxing chapter that gave me something I never knew I needed – to enjoy the misadventures of a non-aquatic dragon ...
Feb 22, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 9: The end of the prologue
Hey! Salis here with another review!! It's starting! It's finally starting! This is what I was waiting for! The scale of events became much bigger in the last chapter, but ...
Feb 21, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 8: the talk
Hi there! I'm back with another review! Abour your worries on how you handled the chapter – I think you did great. It's not like you revealed everything here. You ...
Feb 18, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider - Chapter 7: A Natural Wonder
Hey!! I'm back with another review! This chapter was perfect – the feel of the moment constantly shifted between joy and wonder and sadness and pain. It's like everything in ...
Feb 14, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider - Chapter 6: Release
Hey! Salis here with a review! This was a really great chapter! In terms of the length, I wouldn't say it's too long and don't see a need for it ...
Feb 12, 2022 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 15: Cause
Hey!! A review from Salis here! First off, what a great chapter! I was intrigued by the missing girl and the shadows and the cause for that but when that ...
Feb 11, 2022 -
Re: When the World is Dying: Chapter One
Hey! Salis here with a review!! That was one hell of a chapter to start off a story with! There is this feeling of uneasiness throughout the whole chapter which ...
Feb 10, 2022