SakuraFallsSweetly♥

Wow! That was incredible! You're so young and you can write like that! Firstly, I would just like to say that i really loved this. I loved the deep message ...

Oh my god! That was so good! You must write the next part! I'm hooked already! So, the only thing I noticed was the repitition of saying you were mad ...

Heya, Love :) Great piece! Errors: Just the one! The only thing I really found wrong was the underlining. The short sentenses add enough emphasis so you don't really need ...

I wrote this in fit of anger, but found it quite depressing. Anyway here it is. ****** A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far ...

Oh my gosh that was so amazing! Honestly, I loved it. It really symbolises the real meaning of true love. Gorgeous imagery too, all the scenes you described seemed beautiful. ...

Wow! You're a really good writer! (told everone I would review! :) ) I liked the beginning paragraph the most. My dress was a harsh black, spilling down my legs ...

Hey! I know you told me to check this out ages ago but oh well. Here goes; I LOVED THIS! It was so cute, your friendship with Jenny is really ...

Hey! So I decided to skip sleep and review now. :lol: I reall loved this one though! Grr I so want her and Tristin to be together (sighs). I loved ...

Whoa. That was...different. In a good way though! I loved it. Your use of imagery is so intriguing, and the technique for sound effects was brilliant. Other than one or ...

Hey! Loved this piece. It was absolutely beautiful. I am not going to pick out mistakes because; I am not a critical reviewer and I genuinely only pick out the ...

Hey! I hate seeing stories with no reviews, thought I'd help out. I like the narrator. Seems cool. I also like the technique, the writing style that you used. It's ...

That's a really great song! I loved it. The first verse is my favourite. I'm not sure if it was an accident when you repeated pretty, but I thought it ...

That was adorable! Loved it. The words and phrases you used here were brilliant. You also were good at keeping the same tense. You would be surprised at how many ...

Ohhh! Goose bumps or what?! Brilliant. My favourite part: So, descending through the floors of Hell,My wings caught fire, my face black with ash,A malicious smile on my ghostly face,My ...

Wow! You were really clever here, especially with the title that you used! That was just pure genious. The poem was very good. It was deep and the words held ...