SakuraFallsSweetly♥

This was really good. I actually like, totally loved it. I like how it doesn't have any particular rhyme scheme going on, and the images are just beautiful. You have ...

Hello there! I see that you have quite a few grammatical errors in your writing. Are you new to YWS? I wrote like this a couple of years ago but ...

Hey! This poem was good! It had good rhythm, good flow, and it shows feeling clearly, a little too clearly though. Try not to be so raw with your words, ...

This poem is really beautiful. The way it's captured, the words...amazing. Well done! Here's my favourite part: So I'm writing my deeds somewhere in the sandtrusting the winds you send, ...

Hello, Dudette! Great chapter! Firstly, I love the way Harriet always does dorky things and gets embarrassed when Sonny is around, and the way Aiden is always there when she's ...

Hey, Dudette! This story is coming along really well! The characters are being developed more and more and it's not rushing into any key scenes! Well done! I love that ...

Ha ha I loved this! It was pretty light and fun. It's actually a pretty good parody but I find it's not very original. It's grand for a quick read ...

I love this chapter! It made me laugh. The part when Harriet thinks-"How about I just die now?" Is just priceless! Haha. It's a typical FML moment. :P It reminds ...

That was very deep and touching! Very angsty, very teenage, but good! I'm not sure if it was based on real life experience or fiction, I won't ask, but it ...

I know you said I didn't have to review but I had to. I-loved-it! This song is so good and the story really captures the cold emotions in it. Seriously, ...

Hey there! I really love this! Please PM me when you write more? I love Sonny, he's my favourite. Harriet is pretty awesome too! =] This is such a good ...

Wow that was a very touching story. The main character is very deep and it's good that you make him very known to your readers. Well done on that. I ...

Hey! I really liked this story! I like the sense of angst and it's also got resentment but a refreshing sense of romance. Pretty good combination and it's not even ...

I really, really like this! You're insanely talented! Love the rhyme too. I just...loved it. Nothing bad to say. It's got emotion but not the cliché, and it's got the ...

Awh this is really cute! I think it could be longer though, and perhaps less spaced out? Just a suggestion. But it was good, clearly you're a hopeless romantic. :D ...