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Saifullah

  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: A Country of Red and Blue

    The history is full of discrimination, unjust and wars. Likewise, the poem addresses diverse issues that we fed up with discrimination, but I want to persuade you this is the ...

    Feb 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Wonderland

    The inception and of the poem is really good. This is in well order and the vocabularies are adequate. I wish to start poetry, very soon if god's will. Everyone ...

    Feb 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Politics, Satire Re: Mr. Mayor

    This is the issue of each and every country and town. How to tackle with this problem this is real headache. The poem is interesting but the second stanza is ...

    Feb 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Politics Re: The Eyes of the Nation

    The story is well structured, good sentences and appropriate vocabulary are used. The story makes picture in mind. Therefore, the story is interesting. Firstly, it makes picture about women and ...

    Feb 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1 - AITA edition

    Hello friend. The story is fascinating and productive because it's grammar is correct and appropriate to grasp the idea 💡, and good sentence structure. The vocabulary is adequate. But, some ...

    Feb 3, 2023


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind