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Re: A Country of Red and Blue
The history is full of discrimination, unjust and wars. Likewise, the poem addresses diverse issues that we fed up with discrimination, but I want to persuade you this is the ...
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Re: Wonderland
The inception and of the poem is really good. This is in well order and the vocabularies are adequate. I wish to start poetry, very soon if god's will. Everyone ...
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Re: Mr. Mayor
This is the issue of each and every country and town. How to tackle with this problem this is real headache. The poem is interesting but the second stanza is ...
Feb 7, 2023 -
Re: The Eyes of the Nation
The story is well structured, good sentences and appropriate vocabulary are used. The story makes picture in mind. Therefore, the story is interesting. Firstly, it makes picture about women and ...
Feb 7, 2023 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1 - AITA edition
Hello friend. The story is fascinating and productive because it's grammar is correct and appropriate to grasp the idea 💡, and good sentence structure. The vocabulary is adequate. But, some ...
Feb 3, 2023
