Sage

*glances about uneasily* Goodness...I feel like a guest in someone else's house. Anyway; you asked for commentary, I give you commentary, don't say I didn't warn you. Now, let's see ...

Arrogant? A bit? ...Perhaps. But that's only if you think of being faerie-gifted as something that makes you better than other people. ;-) I enjoyed this, quite a bit, in ...

*fist pump* YES. That is so much more like how little kids are...largely oblivious, except when they aren't. (Real helpful, Sage. Jeez.) Anyway, the only bad thing that stuck out ...

*drools* Bartimaeus Rocks!!! I don't generally buy things unless I feel I have to, but I fully intend to go out and get those books. Maybe even in hardback. Next ...

Hey, Alanna! Since you posted this in fanfiction, I assume it's meant to be a story of some sort...? It seems closer to a rant-style poem to me; to get ...

Ah! Firstly, great title. I look forward to watching this story live up to it! I'm a sucker for come-hither titles; yours was the reason I started reading this. First, ...

Oh, fun! I liked it. My Dad's been trying to talk me into being a lawyer since I could write; maybe I'll give up the writing business and go off ...

Well, I see that I have been missing out! Aero, your story grabbed me right from the start. Damon is now a character that I care about:) His climb is ...

HOORAY and HURRAH!!! *happy kitty dance* So happy to meet the new Emon, dahling, although, as usual, your first chapter makes me wince...but I gather that was the point:-* :) ...

I love Tannar!!! And yes, you already know this, but I shall say it again for the record: that first line of his makes him sound like a real jerk. ...

What charm could entice me What promise ensnare me What dream could convince me To sell my cold soul To a freezing ice world For a pittance of coal ..... ...

[quote="gyrfalcon"]And forgot That just as harshly as you shred Another hand Could put the pieces back together. quote] I like that, a lot. You said you didn't care about serious ...

Hmmm... There are certain moods and certain times of day when this makes perfect sense to me. Now, for example, although I doubt I could've put it so poetically. Kudos ...

I love the way he interacts with his mom. Not to disparage any other part of it, but I would say that bit, the dialogue with her, is the best ...

"One particularly sunny and breezy day, a white bird descended upon the land. It was a giant and glorious bird, intellectual like no other. After a brief glance at the ...