Saga

to tell you the truth, I liked the idea but I am not sure exactly if I like the writing. I didn't notice too much that the others haven't already ...

I'm thinking he meant as it lit or something similiar, I'm not sure.

I have to agree... this poem didn't make much sense, although personaly the rythym seemed ok...

wow... I couldn't find any typos in this, a job well done... The descreption in this is wonderful... But I always liked description... Wonderful!

Oo Thank ya'll... I should have more poetry up soon...

I seem to have a problemo with repetition, especially in some of my *much* older poems.

thanks, i know its not that best but that's because poetry's not my best section of writing.

great poem, but it flowed a little badly, and otherwise great. btw do I know you from somewhere?

yep. . . i was kinda depressed and put it on my school binder. . .

yeah, my favorite stanza is the first one. . .