SadSorrow

Hii! Thanks for the review! and that you liked my poem! I'm going to write some reviews, so I can post more poems! Thanks again!

Wow. I didn't expect that someone would see my true inspiration for this poem lol. But yeah, you're conclusion is exactly how I feel and why I started to write ...

That's very nice to hear! Thank you!

Hii! Thanks for the advice and feedback! I'm going to work on more specifics now to heaten up the tension, because that's exactly what I would like to reach with ...

Hii! First off thanks for the review! I haven't been on YWS much, but I'm back and well it has been over almost two years. But either way I would ...

Thanks for the tips!

Thanks a lot for the advice and feedback!!

First off, The message you want to deliver is great, But try to rhyme the words with each other. That way it'll read better and can be spoken nicer. So ...