Sabine

I find myself rather confused, I'm afraid. This is one of the most literal poems I've ever written, based entirely of of things that actually happened to me. A very ...

removed the intro as per reccommendation, not sure about any furhter editing yet, I almost think this whole poem would be better off scrapped, what do you think? It's just ...

Memorize a box of pictures Polaroids, ill exposed Dated haircuts and specks of sunlight Captured in tender observation. I read the first three lines, pleased but not too impressed, and ...

Hey Sabine! ^^ Don't think I've seen you around before. I'm Evi, nice to meet you, and I wanted you to know that I really enjoyed your poem. I'll just ...

Thanks, LovableLittleSock ! But careful with that internet browsing during school hours *wags finger* ;) Oh, and tinny, I usually hear that in reference to sounds quality, like if a ...

what's and MC workshop? Anyway--- Oh, yes I know. It's utter dreck! 'And I'll leave my heart in your hands...' Seriously who *writes* that. I will not try to defend ...

Goodness that's a long critique O_O. Seriously. You may have more time analysing my teeny prologue than I spent writing it - well, not really, but still ^^. Thank you ...

The dialogues were REALLY good, and I loved them. They showed us a lot about the characters, who they were, and what they did before coming into their current situations. ...

thank you :). I like that part too.

thank you both so very much! as for the catagory, perhaps it does belong in 'dramatic' - I just took a wild guess at where to place it.

thanks! It's a really popular style over in the fan fiction realms... called drabbles. I'm no August, Luna or Delightfully Eccentric, but I love the style. The numbers are word ...

Thanks for all the nice reveiws, guys. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry I didn't respond sooner, I got caught up in... stuff... and practically forgot this place even existed ...

This is a technically very well done poem. Very smooth, goth-esque imagery. I got a little tripped up in the flow of the poem, like i couldn't quite connect with ...

spare and refined, quite thought provoking. I thought the rhythm was very effective. very nice writing.

neither, it's in character (sort of) so i's not my anything but rather a combo character's boyfriend/signifigant other type thing